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‫Welcome back to your second model answer for Alt's rating test, too, and in this lesson, we're going

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‫to look at a model answer for a problem and solution type question.

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‫You remember from previous lessons, that's a problem.

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‫Solution type question requires a slightly different approach.

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‫So it will be very useful for you to see a model answer for one of these question types.

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‫And here is our question that will be writing for.

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‫The Internet has transformed how we interact and live in many great ways, but has also created problems

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‫that didn't exist before.

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‫What are the more serious problems caused by the Internet and what solutions could you suggest?

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‫So even before our short plan, we need to identify what type of question it is.

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‫And it's easily done here.

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‫As we can see, the key words, problems and solutions.

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‫As with the previous model answer, I'm not going to show you my plan, but we'll jump straight into

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‫writing our introduction.

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‫Here is our introduction, three sentence structure, and for the first sentence, I will paraphrase

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‫like this.

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‫The way we live and communicate has changed dramatically over the last decade or so due to the increasing

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‫use of the Internet.

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‫So what phrases and vocabulary did I paraphrase?

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‫Well, honestly, I didn't paraphrase too many pieces of vocabulary, interact, turned in to communicate

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‫and transform, turned into change.

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‫Really, the rest of the sentence is my understanding of Internet use over the last few years, which

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‫is also okay as long as it relates to the question.

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‫Let's move on to our second sentence, which is our plan.

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‫In this essay, I will explore the problems associated with the growing use of the Internet and suggest

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‫possible solutions for them.

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‫I've highlighted our key opening phrase in this essay and the final part of the sentence and suggest

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‫possible solutions for them can also be copied into your plan sentence.

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‫Let's move on to our third sentence, which is outline now, not read through the whole sentence, but

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‫you can see that I've only highlighted the topic, which is Internet use for a problem and solution

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‫question.

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‫You can pretty much copy this sentence.

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‫Exactly.

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‫Replacing Internet use with what ever topic or problem you are presented with.

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‫Let's take a final read through the whole introduction.

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‫The way we live and communicate has changed dramatically over the last decade or so due to the increasing

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‫use of the Internet, in this essay I will explore the problems associated with the growing use of the

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‫Internet and suggest possible solutions for them.

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‫Firstly, I will share an issue related with Internet use and a viable solution.

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‫And secondly, I will discuss another related problem and suggest a possible solution.

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‫So that is all for our very solid, well worded introduction.

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‫Now it's time to move on to our supporting paragraph.

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‫And you may remember that the supporting paragraph sentence types are slightly different for problem

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‫and solution questions.

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‫So in a supporting paragraph for a problem solution question, you'll remember that we have a topic

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‫sentence, a support sentence for detail, and then we suggest a solution and the result that that solution

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‫will bring.

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‫Every time you write a supporting paragraph for a problem solution question, you can use these four

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‫sentence types to create a full paragraph, but you need to make sure that you are writing enough to

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‫get to the 250 word count Mark.

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‫Let's take a look at my first supporting paragraph.

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‫To begin with, it's clear that in some ways, the Internet makes people less sociable as technology

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‫becomes more mobile.

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‫People spend all their free time on the Internet and less time talking and meeting their friends and

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‫peers.

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‫One solution to this problem could be to limit the amount of time people can spend on the Internet per

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‫day.

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‫As a result of that, people will spend more time meeting their family and friends and live happier,

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‫more fulfilling lives.

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‫So here is my solution, which is to limit screen time, and the result is that I believe people will

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‫have happier lives.

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‫Let's take a look at my second supporting paragraph.

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‫As with supporting paragraph one, I will offer another solution for a different problem here.

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‫Let's have a read through.

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‫Many people feel that the Internet is an unsafe place, especially for children.

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‫It is very difficult to monitor and control what we see when we use the Internet or what our children

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‫are using it for.

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‫A possible resolution to this issue could be to ban certain websites from working on our computers.

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‫Consequently, many people will feel much safer using the Internet and families will have protection

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‫from websites and content that are inappropriate for children before moving on.

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‫I'd like to point out a few key things about this supporting paragraph.

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‫And firstly, both our topic and support sentences are complex sentences and we can see that because

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‫of the comma.

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‫Let's quickly mention the phrases in language that I have underlined.

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‫So both a possible resolution to this issue and consequently can be pretty much copied into your supporting

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‫paragraphs.

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‫They're both great ways to start your solution and result sentences in the second supporting paragraph.

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‫So do give them a go in your own essay.

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‫That's all for support in paragraph two.

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‫Let's take a look at our conclusion.

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‫As with the other sections for our essay, answering a problem solution question, the conclusion is

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‫also slightly different.

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‫And you might remember that from the master structure that I gave you a few lessons previously and read

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‫is our summarizing sentence.

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‫And in blue is where I tell you who I think should be fixing this problem.

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‫Let's have a read through now.

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‫In conclusion, the problems associated with the World Wide Web are clearly becoming a major issue in

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‫many countries.

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‫In my opinion, it is the individuals and parents responsibility to make sure the Internet is used responsibly.

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‫So do remember in the final sentence of your conclusion for a problem solution question, you need to

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‫clearly illustrate who should be fixing the problem that is addressed in your question.

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‫So that brings us to the end of our second model answer for Alt's writing test two, and it also brings

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‫to a close the lessons on Alt's writing task one and to.

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‫Do complete the assignment coming up after this video.

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‫And also, I've got one more quick lesson to give you some overall tips for writing.

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‫If you've got any questions, please drop me a message or use a Q&A feature.

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‫Best of luck and see you soon.