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‫Hello, everyone, in this video, we're going to be looking at a very common question type and one

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‫that we haven't looked at really in depth so far, and that is and agree or disagree, question time,

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‫where you must give your opinion in your essay.

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‫So this is going to be a question around the topic of city living, a really common topic in the AIDS

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‫test, as well as for the writing section of its site.

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‫Let's take a look at our checklist now.

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‫I'm not going to go through all the organizational features and language features, the red and green,

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‫because I'm sure you've been using this previously.

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‫But once again, I'll say it's a really useful checklist for when I'm writing and practicing writing

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‫my alt essay and of course, the report for task one.

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‫So do you have a go at using it?

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‫Let's take a look at our question.

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‫People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas,

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‫to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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‫So we can see from the question that it doesn't necessarily state?

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‫I'd definitely say give your opinion, but it's asking you to agree or disagree.

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‫And that in itself means you're going to have to give your opinion.

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‫If you think back to our structure, our master sheet that told you at the paragraphs for each question,

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‫type in an agree or disagree essay.

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‫Of course, you've got your introduction paragraph and you're two supporting paragraphs with the conclusion,

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‫the supporting paragraphs example.

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‫Paragraph one will be to agree or disagree, only choose one for the whole essay.

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‫And the second supporting paragraph again will be to agree or disagree, giving opinion and repeat your

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‫opinion in the conclusion as well as you'll see me using this structure in this upcoming lesson.

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‫So don't worry if you didn't quite catch that.

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‫And now it's time for us to write our quick plan for this question.

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‫OK, so as always, let's begin with supporting paragraph one and taking a quick look back at the question

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‫again, people who live in busy cities are at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas.

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‫Now, I don't know if you know, originally I am from a rural area, a small village in northern England.

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‫I actually do not agree with this statement.

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‫I think people who live in busy cities in many ways are at a disadvantage.

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‫So I'm going to disagree with this statement throughout the whole essay.

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‫I'm not going to discuss both agree and disagree.

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‫I'm going to pick my standpoint, my perspective, and I'm going to either agree or disagree only what

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‫and I'm going to disagree.

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‫I believe people who live in cities are actually at an advantage.

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‫And I suppose there's a few reasons for that.

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‫I think the first thing that I would discuss is the economic reasons, more jobs and opportunities for

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‫earning money.

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‫Now, I think I will probably do to disagree point in paragraph one and probably just one in paragraph

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‫to remembering that it's really important.

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‫I don't write too much in this essay because the time frames are quite tight.

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‫So we don't want to be writing 350, 400 words.

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‫Let's keep it to between 200 and 300 words.

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‫So economic reasons, more jobs and opportunities for earning money.

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‫I'm I'm just thinking off the top of my head some more reasons we could say, what about health care,

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‫health care and hospitals?

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‫Numerous.

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‫Numerous.

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‫There are many of them, OK, economic reasons, more jobs and opportunities for earning money and of

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‫as well health care and hospitals than numerous.

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‫So that my two reasons I'm going to disagree and say people who live in cities are at an advantage.

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‫And in supporting paragraph one, my two reasons are money, economic reasons and health care.

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‫Going into my second supporting paragraph, I'm also going to discuss social life and meeting friends

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‫because it can be quite difficult living in rural areas to have an exciting social life where you can

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‫go to restaurants, easily meet friends and do exciting things together.

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‫And so I'm going to discuss this in supporting paragraph two and do remember throughout, I will be

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‫giving lots of examples to discuss and explore my ideas.

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‫OK, and as we are having to give our opinion in the conclusion, I will also quickly write something

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‫here.

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‫So I'll put o4 opinion.

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‫And of course, I disagree.

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‫People in cities have more opportunities in general.

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‫So, of course, I'm going to flesh that out, explore and expand on these ideas when I begin writing.

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‫But this plan, it took maybe a minute and a half to write.

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‫And really importantly, it gives me all the basis for the ideas that I'll be writing about in my essay,

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‫even if I don't look at the plan again, I've kind of thought about some of the ideas that I'm going

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‫to be writing about.

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‫So I feel a lot more prepared than if I hadn't written a plan.

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‫So that's really important.

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‫I definitely recommend you write a plan.

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‫OK, so let's move on to take a look at beginning our writing.

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‫OK, so let's begin and we're going to start, of course, with our three sentence introduction paraphrase

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‫plan and outline.

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‫So I need to paraphrase the question here.

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‫People who live in busy cities are in many ways a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas, busy

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‫cities.

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‫I can definitely think of synonyms for that.

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‫And let's start with many people who live that's pretty much using the same language.

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‫But I'll change a few things.

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‫You don't have to change everything.

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‫Remember, just paraphrase some key phrases.

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‫Many people who live in both sleighing cities, Metropolis, Merlots, think of another word for that

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‫in busy towns and urban areas.

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‫I like that many people who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who

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‫live in smaller villages and countryside areas.

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‫So I have quite simply paraphrased a few key phrases using my understanding of synonyms.

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‫Many people who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who live in small

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‫villages and countryside areas very much similar to the question.

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‫So that's my first introduction sentence, the paraphrased introduction.

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‫Again, this signals to the examiner that you have a good understanding of, firstly, what the question

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‫is asking and your ability to use synonyms.

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‫So straight away, the examiner is thinking, OK, this aout student is confident.

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‫And now we just need to move on to our plan sentence, which quite simply is just saying what type of

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‫question this is in this essay.

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‫I will either agree or disagree with this statement.

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‫And now I need to outline using firstly and secondly what I will write in my support paragraphs.

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‫So I think looking back to my plan, I was going to talk about economic and healthcare being positives.

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‫So firstly, I will discuss the benefits of finding work and health care whilst living in a city.

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‫And secondly, so we've got these opener's that I really just recommend you use in every task to report.

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‫And secondly, I was going to discuss the social the social benefits of living in a city.

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‫And secondly, I will discuss I have used here so let's say explore.

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‫I will explore the positives of the social and the social envelope.

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‫And secondly, I will explore the positives of the social aspects of living in a city.

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‫OK, so let's take a very quick read back.

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‫Many people who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who live in small

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‫villages and countryside areas.

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‫In this essay, I will either disagree or disagree with the statement.

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‫Firstly, I will discuss the benefits of finding work and health care whilst living in a city.

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‫And secondly, I will explore the positives of this social aspects of living in a city.

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‫I'm going to change this.

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‫This isn't perfect.

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‫This is a rough introduction, but it would score quite highly of the social aspects of living in an

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‫urban area.

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‫Again, I don't want to be repeating vocabulary too often.

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‫I want to show the examiner that I can use a range of vocabulary and structures.

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‫OK, so let's move on to my first supports paragraph.

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‫And that is to discuss the economic positives, the ability to find work more easier probably than you

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‫would do in the countryside.

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‫So in my opinion, one of the great advantages to living in a city is the economic economic benefits

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‫that it can bring.

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‫For example, it is true that many large and wealthy businesses.

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‫And cooperation, so I'm being more specific in my example and giving extra detail, corporations operate

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‫in urban areas in large towns and cities.

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‫So I've given an example.

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‫I've stated my point here.

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‫So the big advantages is the economic benefits.

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‫And here I'm going to set an example.

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‫So large and wealthy businesses and corporations operate in large towns and cities.

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‫For this reason, people often find that they can gain employment a lot easier, a lot easier than they

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‫would if they lived in the countryside.

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‫OK, so I've made my first point.

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‫I've given an example and I've tried to give extra detail to explain my thinking.

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‫And next, I was going to talk about health care.

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‫Furthermore, so I'm using these sentence openers and but I, of course, need to make sure that I'm

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‫using my punctuation.

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‫Furthermore, it is also true that in a metropolis, in a metropolitan area, metropolitan area, people

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‫have more access to health care and quality hospitals, hospitals.

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‫So furthermore, it is also true that in a metropolitan area, people have more access to health care

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‫and quality hospitals.

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‫Often I'm just I just want to add an extra bit of detail just to show the examiner that I can really

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‫describe and discuss what I'm thinking.

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‫So people have more access to health care and quality hospitals.

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‫Furthermore, in addition to this, in addition to this, the waiting hours are often much shorter as

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‫they are better staffed.

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‫OK, so just adding a little detail at the end, just to give a bit more of an example in regards to

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‫my point of health care, in addition to this, the waiting hours are often much shorter as they are

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‫better staffed.

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‫That may be true.

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‫That might not be true in some city hospitals.

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‫They do have more staff, but I'm not 100 percent sure the waiting hours are shorter.

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‫However, this is a test of my English fluency, not whether I know the ins and outs of the health care

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‫system.

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‫OK, so that is my first paragraph complete.

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‫Let's move on to supporting paragraph to.

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‫And I was going to discuss this social benefits, meeting friends and restaurants, I was going to discuss

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‫that in my second paragraph.

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‫So I need a good sentence opener.

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‫Also, I do feel that people who reside instead of live in cities benefit from a more social and active

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‫lifestyle.

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‫So I'm saying that they are more social, more active, able to meet friends a bit easier.

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‫Also, I do feel that people who reside in cities benefit from a more social and active lifestyle.

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‫I'm going to discuss it, discuss living in villages and sort of talk from my experiences when living

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‫in small, isolated places.

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‫It is definitely more difficult to meet friends and visit restaurants or bars in big cities and towns

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‫due to transport and availability of venues.

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‫It is quite easy to socialize, to socialize and unwind.

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‫And so we've got this socialize, unwind kind of topic, specific vocabulary, quite native sounding

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‫phrase to relax.

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‫So I'm using definite topic, specific vocabulary, isolated and suburban.

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‫How are you suburban yet?

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‫Maybe I can that in metropolitan.

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‫Definitely topic specific.

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‫I wonder if there's something I can add just to increase this supporting paragraph somewhat.

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‫It is quite easy to socialize and unwind.

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‫It may also be that due to being able to meet friends more frequently, city dwellers, that's quite

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‫a native sounding phrase.

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‫City dwellers might also lead happier lives.

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‫So I just wanted to add a bit more detail again.

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‫So I've put in this sentence saying that maybe city dwellers are happier because they can meet friends

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‫more often.

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‫And I think that we have to quite nicely detailed, supporting paragraphs.

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‫It's now time to move on to our conclusion where I will give my opinion once more.

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‫OK, so as I am giving my opinion, the conclusion for an agree or disagree essay will have two sentences.

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‫The first sentence will paraphrase my main ideas.

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‫So not paraphrasing the question like in the introduction, I will paraphrase myself very quickly.

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‫Mention health care and socializing and economic reasons, and the second sentence will reaffirm and

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‫restate my opinion.

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‫Let's begin with, in conclusion, a great way to start our conclusion.

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‫In conclusion, the benefits of living in a city in a city are numerous from sorry, apologies for my

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‫spelling are numerous, from nightlife, friends, health care and better employment prospects.

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‫That's a great native colloquial sounding phrase for you that.

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‫So that's my first sentence and the conclusion I now need to give my opinion once more.

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‫Therefore, I believe that people who live in city areas are actually at an advantage to those who do

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‫not.

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‫OK, so that's quite simply reaffirming have restating my opinion on the question.

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‫Do you agree or disagree?

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‫People in cities are at a disadvantage?

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‫Well, therefore, I believe that people who live in cities are actually at an advantage to those who

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‫do not.

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‫Let's have a quick read through this essay.

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‫Many people who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who live in small

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‫villages and countryside areas.

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‫In this essay, I will either agree or disagree with this statement.

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‫Firstly, I will discuss the benefits of finding work and health care whilst living in a city.

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‫And secondly, I will explore the positives, the social aspects of living in an urban area.

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‫In my opinion, one of the great advantages to living in a city is the economic benefits that it can

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‫bring.

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‫For example, it is true that many large and wealthy businesses and corporations operate in large towns

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‫and cities.

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‫I just noticed I repeated a large in the same sentences try not to repeat vocabulary too often.

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‫For this reason, people often find that they can gain employment a lot easier than they would if they

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‫lived in the countryside.

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‫Furthermore, it is also true that in a metropolitan area, people have more access to health care and

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‫quality hospitals.

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‫In addition to this, the waiting hours are often much shorter as they are better staffed.

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‫Also, I do feel that people who reside in cities benefit from a more social and active lifestyle when

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‫living in small, isolated places.

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‫It is definitely more difficult to meet friends and visit restaurants or bars in big cities and towns

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‫due to transport and availability of venues.

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‫It is quite easy to socialize and unwind.

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‫It may also be that due to being able to meet friends more frequently, city dwellers might also lead

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‫happier lives.

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‫In conclusion, the benefits of living in a city are numerous from nightlife, friends, health care

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‫and better employment prospects.

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‫Therefore, I believe that people who live in city areas are actually at an advantage to those who do

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‫not.

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‫Okay, so that is my full task to S.A report and it is for an agree or disagree essay.

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‫And as you can see, it's packed full of my opinion.

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‫I'll not go through all the features checklist.

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‫I'm confident.

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‫I've included lots of it.

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‫Importantly, again, I can see that I've got those four paragraphs.

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‫When the examiner sees this, even before they start reading, they will recognize that you have an

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‫introduction to supporting paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph.

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‫So they will straightaway be thinking this student has studied and is following a formula to organize

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‫their writing.

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‫So it gives really it gives a good message to the examiner.

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‫If you use this structure that I taught you all the best and I hope to upload some more video lessons

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‫for you soon.