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‫Hello and welcome back, everybody.

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‫So we have another modeled right lesson here, we're going to be looking at the economy as our topic.

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‫We're going to be looking at a really interesting question tonight that is quite different to the other

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‫question type.

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‫So it's definitely a different structure, a slightly different way of writing.

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‫So definitely worth while.

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‫You understanding how to answer these questions by understanding the question types, by understanding

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‫how to structure your writing, both report and essay test one on Sesto, you can answer the question

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‫properly and score higher in your task achievement than description.

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‫OK, so let's move on.

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‫Let's take a look at a bit more information.

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‫And here we have a problem solution structure.

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‫So as you probably realize, this is a problem solution question we're going to be looking at today.

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‫So the problem solution question is quite different, as I just said.

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‫And that's because the sentence types that we use in the supporting paragraph is quite different to

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‫all the other sentence types.

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‫So within most test to essays, we have a topic of support and then an example, pretty much how we

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‫structure each sentence.

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‫But in a problem, solution question is quite different.

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‫We have a topic and support which tells us the problem and then we have a solution and result, which

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‫of course tells us the solution.

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‫Now these are four sentences, so we're not going to if we have two problems and for each supporting

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‫paragraph.

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‫So four problems each.

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‫We can't write eight sentences per supporting paragraph, four sentences per problem, two problems

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‫per supporting paragraph that would be eight.

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‫So we need to chop this a little bit at times so that we're not writing too much, so that we don't

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‫lose time.

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‫But this is a great way to think about it.

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‫So we might describe problem one as all four things and then problem, too.

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‫In supporting paragraph one, we might just do a topic and a result we might just do a topic and a solution.

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‫We might even just do a topic and support, but probably not so much that we might just do these two.

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‫So we could probably say six sentences per supporting paragraph, but of course, that may change.

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‫So really important.

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‫We have an understanding about these sentences.

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‫So we have problem sentence types and solution sentence types.

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‫OK, I'm going to show you how we do this, of course, throughout this video lesson.

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‫So let's take a look at our question.

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‫Many smaller local shops close due to the opening of large supermarkets.

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‫Topic sentence here, question sentence.

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‫What are some of the problems and possible solutions for this?

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‫OK, so I don't really need to, but I now know problem, solution question.

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‫And we already recognized this.

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‫And let me just go to the topic one more time.

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‫So I'm just beginning to think about some ideas for this many smaller local shops close because supermarkets,

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‫large supermarkets open.

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‫Now, a lot of us may have seen this in our hometowns or places that we have lived.

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‫And there are definitely a few problems related to this.

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‫Quite an interesting question, I think.

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‫So let's have a look at our plan supporting paragraph one.

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‫So what are some of the problems?

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‫So local shops closing large supermarkets.

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‫Now, one of the great things about large supermarkets is there's probably more and cheaper products,

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‫but that's not what we're looking at.

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‫We're looking at the problems, smaller and local shops.

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‫I would say that these smaller and local shops are better for the local economy, for the local economy

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‫where they're from.

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‫Large supermarkets often buy goods from many different places around the world, whereas smaller local

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‫shops employ and make guro.

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‫If it's food, everything locally, they don't generally bring lots of goods and employment from other

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‫countries or other areas.

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‫So they're probably better for.

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‫The local economy, so I'm just going to type that, remember, the plan needs to be short economy.

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‫There we go, local economy.

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‫So the large supermarkets benefit probably the nation or the country that they're from.

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‫But small local shops are better for the small area that they are in.

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‫Also, the small local shops generally handmade.

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‫It's generally things that are done inside the shop, whereas large supermarkets or even large shops

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‫often have all their products mass manufactured, which at times can mean that there are corners cut

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‫in employment or in the product, for example, chemicals within foods.

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‫So I'm just going to right here fair trade, because I think that's important to say that local shops,

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‫small shops really often concentrate on fair trade.

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‫So paying employers, people at their work, paying them properly, not buying cheap products from abroad,

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‫often made in difficult situations or poorly paid situations.

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‫This is probably a bit better in terms of fair trade.

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‫So two problems per supporting paragraph.

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‫Let's go on to supporting paragraph two.

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‫What else could I say?

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‫Local, smaller shops.

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‫So I'm thinking back to my own experiences.

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‫Always good to do this.

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‫And I'm just thinking with the local shops, you have a personal relationship with them.

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‫The customer service is often a lot better because you know these people personally.

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‫So I think customer service is something that I will talk about as a problem of large supermarkets.

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‫They have so many people who shop at them, they often don't care as much about individual customers.

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‫And OK.

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‫And I think local shops, I think if we say maybe supporting the community, so when we're buying from

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‫people who we know, possibly our friends who live in the same area as us, we're often supporting the

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‫community, the local community.

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‫Whereas if we're buying from these big conglomerates, these big companies, it's not really supporting

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‫the local community, supporting their huge big business.

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‫So we have our four problems here, and I think that's going to give us a lot to write about.

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‫So let's jump in to our writing now.

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‫OK, so here we are and of course, will begin with our introduction paragraph.

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‫Many smaller local shops closed due to the opening of large supermarkets, often smaller Sláma.

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‫Smaller, smaller shops run by individuals have to close after end business due to the opening of big

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‫instead of large supermarkets nearby.

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‫I think that's perfectly fine.

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‫Often smaller shops run by individuals have to end their business.

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‫Just add that in their business due to the opening of big supermarkets nearby.

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‫In this essay, I will explore the problems associated with this and consider some possible solutions.

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‫Once again, if you come across a problem solution question, you can pretty much just copy this exactly.

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‫Letter to letter.

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‫OK, firstly, I'm not going to say both to problems you can talk about the first one.

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‫I will consider the effects.

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‫Oh, one moment on the local economy.

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‫And secondly, I will share my thoughts on supporting the local community.

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‫OK, so that just gives it a bit of an idea.

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‫So we have this local economy, which was, you know, the fair trade and buying local.

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‫And then we have the local community, local, local.

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‫But I'm not too worried about the repetition, although always good to read by.

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‫And just check to see if it sounds a little bit too repetitive.

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‫Let's do that now.

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‫Firstly, I will consider the effects on the local economy.

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‫And secondly, I will share my thoughts on supporting the local community nearby.

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‫I might say that nearby surrounding community.

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‫Let's change that.

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‫I think maybe that repetition did sound a little bit dull.

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‫Let's try and use interesting vocabulary that is not repeated.

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‫OK, so let's talk about the local economy to begin with, to begin with.

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‫One to begin with, by buying from local shops and small businesses, we can inject money directly,

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‫inject money, nice phrasal verb directly into the people who live near us, just trying to avoid repeating

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‫myself too often.

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‫So probably a slightly strange way of saying we can inject money directly into the local economy.

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‫But I feel like I might say this often.

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‫So I'm trying to think of whilst writing different ways to say local economy, let's read this bag to

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‫begin with, by buying from local shops and small businesses, we can inject money directly into the

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‫people directly to not into directly to the people who live near us at times when we utilize supermarkets.

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‫Lots of spelling mistakes here.

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‫This, of course, is the British spelling with the S. At times when we utilize supermarkets, the money

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‫spend there is then disbursed back into the business's headquarters.

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‫Headquarters often not nearby.

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‫I do love using brackets in my writing dispersed.

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‫Let's read this back.

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‫At times when we utilize supermarkets, the money spent there is then dispersed back into the business

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‫headquarters.

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‫Business is there's a mistake.

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‫Business businesses, business businesses, business businesses.

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‫I'm saying this office and businesses headquarters.

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‫I think that's OK.

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‫Business's headquarters often not nearby.

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‫OK, so this is my problem here.

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‫I have my topic, the first sentence and my support giving a bit more information about this, injecting

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‫money into people nearby and supporting the local economy.

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‫Now, I need to consider the solutions for this.

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‫What possible solutions could I consider?

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‫I'm going to say let's say governments should subsidize should subsidize small businesses, businesses

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‫to allow them to compete with larger, more financially secure companies.

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‫This would result.

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‫I'm on a roll.

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‫This would result in these smaller shops closing down less.

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‫OK, that was quick.

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‫But sometimes when we write, we just need to go with the flow.

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‫Governments should subsidize small businesses to allow them to compete with larger, more financially

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‫secure companies.

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‫So basically local governments, national governments should pay small companies money to stay open

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‫and then this would result in smaller shops closing down less.

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‫So this is my result sentence here at the end.

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‫OK, so I think what I might do now is just quickly give the second problem, which was fair trade,

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‫and then just consider a solution for this.

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‫So two short sentences.

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‫I'm trying to aim for around that 300 mark.

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‫Pretty much.

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‫I don't want to write much more than that, or it may take too much time, especially whilst I'm rereading

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‫and editing.

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‫OK.

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‫Also, huge supermarkets.

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‫I'm not saying large or big.

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‫Huge supermarkets don't engage in fair trade as much.

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‫This means that employment rights are often.

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‫I'm actually just going to right the problem here.

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‫Also, huge supermarkets don't engage in fair trade as much.

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‫This means that employment rights are often waivered.

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‫Waivered where as so?

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‫Actually, I'm going to waive it.

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‫There we go.

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‫Where as this means employment rights are often waived.

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‫So this really is my support for fair trade, my topics here.

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‫Then I'm going to do my support and a really quick result.

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‫So I have this conjunction, this Lincolnwood, where as this means that employment rights are often

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‫waived, whereas in small shops, let's say, owners often focus more on positive fair trade, positive

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‫fair trade in their local area.

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‫Great.

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‫So this means that employment rights are often waived, whereas in small shops, owners often focus

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‫more on positive trade in their local area.

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‫And it's actually kind of my support and slightly also moving into the idea of the solution.

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‫So small shops are more about fair trade.

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‫Basically, huge supermarkets don't have fair trade, which can be bad for people who work.

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‫Their small shops have better fair trade, so let's support them more kind of going into problem and

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‫solution.

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‫But mainly I would just say that's more of just another problem.

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‫However, if I'm to write huge paragraphs each time, it's just going to be too much.

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‫I'm still answering the question, what are some of the problems and solutions?

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‫So that's fine.

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‫That's perfectly OK.

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‫Let's move on to supporting paragraph two.

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‫So we were saying about customer service and supporting the local community.

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‫So I'm going to talk about customer service first.

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‫Another issue related to the opening of big supermarkets is poorer customer service given to their customers.

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‫Another issue related to the opening of big supermarkets is poor customer service given to their customers,

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‫given to their users.

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‫I'm just trying to avoid repeating myself too often here.

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‫So let's go into this in a bit more detail topic.

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‫And now on to my support sentence.

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‫Give a bit more information.

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‫There are too many customers within these massive businesses, another sitting in their massive businesses

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‫so they are unable to give real attention to individuals when problems arise.

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‫Wow, that was quick.

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‫I was really on a roll then once more.

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‫But let's read this back.

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‫Make sure that we've got everything grammatically accurate.

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‫There are too many customers within these massive businesses, so they are able to give real attention

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‫to individuals when problems arise.

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‫OK, topic my support and then the solution.

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‫So what could be a possible solution for this am I think I'm actually not going to say, well, let's

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‫use local shops.

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‫I think the solution I'm going to offer is to say supermarkets should employ more customer service focused

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‫representatives.

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‫That way.

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‫The result, customers could be listened to more.

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‫So I'm not going to talk about small shops here.

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‫I'm going to give a solution to the problem of big supermarkets, customer service being that the big

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‫supermarkets could solve this, not the small shops.

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‫There are too many customer service, too many customers within these massive businesses, so they're

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‫unable to give real attention to individuals when problems arise.

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‫A great way to solve this problem would be for supermarkets to actively employ more customer service,

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‫service focused employees, employ employees and repeating a little bit.

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‫But that's okay, I think, to actively employ more customer service focused employees.

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‫This would then allow each individual, individual, individual customer within the supermarket to have

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‫more one to one conversations with staff if they have any problems or questions.

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‫OK, so let's read this back.

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‫A great way to solve this problem would be for supermarkets to actively employ more customer service

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‫focused employees.

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‫This would then allow each result.

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‫This would then allow each individual customer within the supermarket to have more one to one conversations

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‫with staff if they have any problems or questions.

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‫OK, there we go.

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‫And so I've just got a bit of space age to talk about that, supporting the local community, which

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‫we don't really do so much with these big companies.

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‫Supporting small businesses in the local community, so I'm just going to give a problem for this,

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‫I'm just going to offer a really quick solution to OK as well as this.

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‫So I'm going to talk about supporting the local community when small businesses or shops close.

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‫It makes it difficult to support, to support people in the local community as much.

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‫OK, so what ways could we consider how can we solve this problem?

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‫So when the small businesses close those small business owners, they're out of work.

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‫We can't support them as much.

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‫We can't support those people close to us much.

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‫So what's one of the solutions I can think of for this?

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‫Well, I would possibly say we should encourage people to shop locally as much as possible, possibly

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‫with discounts of things like this.

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‫We should therefore encourage people to shop locally as much as possible to help those within within

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‫our surrounding communities.

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‫That just as a nice short sentence.

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‫The solution I've offered.

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‫So this is less problem here as well as this.

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‫When small businesses or shops close, it makes it difficult to support people in the local community

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‫as much.

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‫They don't like the sound of that.

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‫They're not going to get rid of that community.

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‫We should therefore encourage people to shop locally as much as possible to help those within our surrounding

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‫communities.

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‫OK, so I think we can jump on to a quick conclusion, no need to give our opinion.

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‫In conclusion, it's clear to see that there are many problems and possible solutions to large supermarkets

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‫opening and closing smaller shops in local communities, repeating local communities again.

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‫But that's no problem.

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‫OK, so let's take a look at our word count.

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‫OK, so actually slightly shorter than I thought, I thought I was going to go quite over, but it's

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‫actually 310 words.

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‫Exactly.

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‫So to be honest, that's about right, or maybe even a little bit shorter.

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‫So, yeah, pretty good.

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‫I did manage to explore a lot of the problems and give some really useful solutions.

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‫So this is a top a top marked essay here.

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‫As always, if you have any questions, please do use the Q&A section.

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‫I always like hearing from you.