‫Hello and welcome back, everybody.
‫So we have another modeled right lesson here, we're going to be looking at the economy as our topic.
‫We're going to be looking at a really interesting question tonight that is quite different to the other
‫question type.
‫So it's definitely a different structure, a slightly different way of writing.
‫So definitely worth while.
‫You understanding how to answer these questions by understanding the question types, by understanding
‫how to structure your writing, both report and essay test one on Sesto, you can answer the question
‫properly and score higher in your task achievement than description.
‫OK, so let's move on.
‫Let's take a look at a bit more information.
‫And here we have a problem solution structure.
‫So as you probably realize, this is a problem solution question we're going to be looking at today.
‫So the problem solution question is quite different, as I just said.
‫And that's because the sentence types that we use in the supporting paragraph is quite different to
‫all the other sentence types.
‫So within most test to essays, we have a topic of support and then an example, pretty much how we
‫structure each sentence.
‫But in a problem, solution question is quite different.
‫We have a topic and support which tells us the problem and then we have a solution and result, which
‫of course tells us the solution.
‫Now these are four sentences, so we're not going to if we have two problems and for each supporting
‫paragraph.
‫So four problems each.
‫We can't write eight sentences per supporting paragraph, four sentences per problem, two problems
‫per supporting paragraph that would be eight.
‫So we need to chop this a little bit at times so that we're not writing too much, so that we don't
‫lose time.
‫But this is a great way to think about it.
‫So we might describe problem one as all four things and then problem, too.
‫In supporting paragraph one, we might just do a topic and a result we might just do a topic and a solution.
‫We might even just do a topic and support, but probably not so much that we might just do these two.
‫So we could probably say six sentences per supporting paragraph, but of course, that may change.
‫So really important.
‫We have an understanding about these sentences.
‫So we have problem sentence types and solution sentence types.
‫OK, I'm going to show you how we do this, of course, throughout this video lesson.
‫So let's take a look at our question.
‫Many smaller local shops close due to the opening of large supermarkets.
‫Topic sentence here, question sentence.
‫What are some of the problems and possible solutions for this?
‫OK, so I don't really need to, but I now know problem, solution question.
‫And we already recognized this.
‫And let me just go to the topic one more time.
‫So I'm just beginning to think about some ideas for this many smaller local shops close because supermarkets,
‫large supermarkets open.
‫Now, a lot of us may have seen this in our hometowns or places that we have lived.
‫And there are definitely a few problems related to this.
‫Quite an interesting question, I think.
‫So let's have a look at our plan supporting paragraph one.
‫So what are some of the problems?
‫So local shops closing large supermarkets.
‫Now, one of the great things about large supermarkets is there's probably more and cheaper products,
‫but that's not what we're looking at.
‫We're looking at the problems, smaller and local shops.
‫I would say that these smaller and local shops are better for the local economy, for the local economy
‫where they're from.
‫Large supermarkets often buy goods from many different places around the world, whereas smaller local
‫shops employ and make guro.
‫If it's food, everything locally, they don't generally bring lots of goods and employment from other
‫countries or other areas.
‫So they're probably better for.
‫The local economy, so I'm just going to type that, remember, the plan needs to be short economy.
‫There we go, local economy.
‫So the large supermarkets benefit probably the nation or the country that they're from.
‫But small local shops are better for the small area that they are in.
‫Also, the small local shops generally handmade.
‫It's generally things that are done inside the shop, whereas large supermarkets or even large shops
‫often have all their products mass manufactured, which at times can mean that there are corners cut
‫in employment or in the product, for example, chemicals within foods.
‫So I'm just going to right here fair trade, because I think that's important to say that local shops,
‫small shops really often concentrate on fair trade.
‫So paying employers, people at their work, paying them properly, not buying cheap products from abroad,
‫often made in difficult situations or poorly paid situations.
‫This is probably a bit better in terms of fair trade.
‫So two problems per supporting paragraph.
‫Let's go on to supporting paragraph two.
‫What else could I say?
‫Local, smaller shops.
‫So I'm thinking back to my own experiences.
‫Always good to do this.
‫And I'm just thinking with the local shops, you have a personal relationship with them.
‫The customer service is often a lot better because you know these people personally.
‫So I think customer service is something that I will talk about as a problem of large supermarkets.
‫They have so many people who shop at them, they often don't care as much about individual customers.
‫And OK.
‫And I think local shops, I think if we say maybe supporting the community, so when we're buying from
‫people who we know, possibly our friends who live in the same area as us, we're often supporting the
‫community, the local community.
‫Whereas if we're buying from these big conglomerates, these big companies, it's not really supporting
‫the local community, supporting their huge big business.
‫So we have our four problems here, and I think that's going to give us a lot to write about.
‫So let's jump in to our writing now.
‫OK, so here we are and of course, will begin with our introduction paragraph.
‫Many smaller local shops closed due to the opening of large supermarkets, often smaller Sláma.
‫Smaller, smaller shops run by individuals have to close after end business due to the opening of big
‫instead of large supermarkets nearby.
‫I think that's perfectly fine.
‫Often smaller shops run by individuals have to end their business.
‫Just add that in their business due to the opening of big supermarkets nearby.
‫In this essay, I will explore the problems associated with this and consider some possible solutions.
‫Once again, if you come across a problem solution question, you can pretty much just copy this exactly.
‫Letter to letter.
‫OK, firstly, I'm not going to say both to problems you can talk about the first one.
‫I will consider the effects.
‫Oh, one moment on the local economy.
‫And secondly, I will share my thoughts on supporting the local community.
‫OK, so that just gives it a bit of an idea.
‫So we have this local economy, which was, you know, the fair trade and buying local.
‫And then we have the local community, local, local.
‫But I'm not too worried about the repetition, although always good to read by.
‫And just check to see if it sounds a little bit too repetitive.
‫Let's do that now.
‫Firstly, I will consider the effects on the local economy.
‫And secondly, I will share my thoughts on supporting the local community nearby.
‫I might say that nearby surrounding community.
‫Let's change that.
‫I think maybe that repetition did sound a little bit dull.
‫Let's try and use interesting vocabulary that is not repeated.
‫OK, so let's talk about the local economy to begin with, to begin with.
‫One to begin with, by buying from local shops and small businesses, we can inject money directly,
‫inject money, nice phrasal verb directly into the people who live near us, just trying to avoid repeating
‫myself too often.
‫So probably a slightly strange way of saying we can inject money directly into the local economy.
‫But I feel like I might say this often.
‫So I'm trying to think of whilst writing different ways to say local economy, let's read this bag to
‫begin with, by buying from local shops and small businesses, we can inject money directly into the
‫people directly to not into directly to the people who live near us at times when we utilize supermarkets.
‫Lots of spelling mistakes here.
‫This, of course, is the British spelling with the S. At times when we utilize supermarkets, the money
‫spend there is then disbursed back into the business's headquarters.
‫Headquarters often not nearby.
‫I do love using brackets in my writing dispersed.
‫Let's read this back.
‫At times when we utilize supermarkets, the money spent there is then dispersed back into the business
‫headquarters.
‫Business is there's a mistake.
‫Business businesses, business businesses, business businesses.
‫I'm saying this office and businesses headquarters.
‫I think that's OK.
‫Business's headquarters often not nearby.
‫OK, so this is my problem here.
‫I have my topic, the first sentence and my support giving a bit more information about this, injecting
‫money into people nearby and supporting the local economy.
‫Now, I need to consider the solutions for this.
‫What possible solutions could I consider?
‫I'm going to say let's say governments should subsidize should subsidize small businesses, businesses
‫to allow them to compete with larger, more financially secure companies.
‫This would result.
‫I'm on a roll.
‫This would result in these smaller shops closing down less.
‫OK, that was quick.
‫But sometimes when we write, we just need to go with the flow.
‫Governments should subsidize small businesses to allow them to compete with larger, more financially
‫secure companies.
‫So basically local governments, national governments should pay small companies money to stay open
‫and then this would result in smaller shops closing down less.
‫So this is my result sentence here at the end.
‫OK, so I think what I might do now is just quickly give the second problem, which was fair trade,
‫and then just consider a solution for this.
‫So two short sentences.
‫I'm trying to aim for around that 300 mark.
‫Pretty much.
‫I don't want to write much more than that, or it may take too much time, especially whilst I'm rereading
‫and editing.
‫OK.
‫Also, huge supermarkets.
‫I'm not saying large or big.
‫Huge supermarkets don't engage in fair trade as much.
‫This means that employment rights are often.
‫I'm actually just going to right the problem here.
‫Also, huge supermarkets don't engage in fair trade as much.
‫This means that employment rights are often waivered.
‫Waivered where as so?
‫Actually, I'm going to waive it.
‫There we go.
‫Where as this means employment rights are often waived.
‫So this really is my support for fair trade, my topics here.
‫Then I'm going to do my support and a really quick result.
‫So I have this conjunction, this Lincolnwood, where as this means that employment rights are often
‫waived, whereas in small shops, let's say, owners often focus more on positive fair trade, positive
‫fair trade in their local area.
‫Great.
‫So this means that employment rights are often waived, whereas in small shops, owners often focus
‫more on positive trade in their local area.
‫And it's actually kind of my support and slightly also moving into the idea of the solution.
‫So small shops are more about fair trade.
‫Basically, huge supermarkets don't have fair trade, which can be bad for people who work.
‫Their small shops have better fair trade, so let's support them more kind of going into problem and
‫solution.
‫But mainly I would just say that's more of just another problem.
‫However, if I'm to write huge paragraphs each time, it's just going to be too much.
‫I'm still answering the question, what are some of the problems and solutions?
‫So that's fine.
‫That's perfectly OK.
‫Let's move on to supporting paragraph two.
‫So we were saying about customer service and supporting the local community.
‫So I'm going to talk about customer service first.
‫Another issue related to the opening of big supermarkets is poorer customer service given to their customers.
‫Another issue related to the opening of big supermarkets is poor customer service given to their customers,
‫given to their users.
‫I'm just trying to avoid repeating myself too often here.
‫So let's go into this in a bit more detail topic.
‫And now on to my support sentence.
‫Give a bit more information.
‫There are too many customers within these massive businesses, another sitting in their massive businesses
‫so they are unable to give real attention to individuals when problems arise.
‫Wow, that was quick.
‫I was really on a roll then once more.
‫But let's read this back.
‫Make sure that we've got everything grammatically accurate.
‫There are too many customers within these massive businesses, so they are able to give real attention
‫to individuals when problems arise.
‫OK, topic my support and then the solution.
‫So what could be a possible solution for this am I think I'm actually not going to say, well, let's
‫use local shops.
‫I think the solution I'm going to offer is to say supermarkets should employ more customer service focused
‫representatives.
‫That way.
‫The result, customers could be listened to more.
‫So I'm not going to talk about small shops here.
‫I'm going to give a solution to the problem of big supermarkets, customer service being that the big
‫supermarkets could solve this, not the small shops.
‫There are too many customer service, too many customers within these massive businesses, so they're
‫unable to give real attention to individuals when problems arise.
‫A great way to solve this problem would be for supermarkets to actively employ more customer service,
‫service focused employees, employ employees and repeating a little bit.
‫But that's okay, I think, to actively employ more customer service focused employees.
‫This would then allow each individual, individual, individual customer within the supermarket to have
‫more one to one conversations with staff if they have any problems or questions.
‫OK, so let's read this back.
‫A great way to solve this problem would be for supermarkets to actively employ more customer service
‫focused employees.
‫This would then allow each result.
‫This would then allow each individual customer within the supermarket to have more one to one conversations
‫with staff if they have any problems or questions.
‫OK, there we go.
‫And so I've just got a bit of space age to talk about that, supporting the local community, which
‫we don't really do so much with these big companies.
‫Supporting small businesses in the local community, so I'm just going to give a problem for this,
‫I'm just going to offer a really quick solution to OK as well as this.
‫So I'm going to talk about supporting the local community when small businesses or shops close.
‫It makes it difficult to support, to support people in the local community as much.
‫OK, so what ways could we consider how can we solve this problem?
‫So when the small businesses close those small business owners, they're out of work.
‫We can't support them as much.
‫We can't support those people close to us much.
‫So what's one of the solutions I can think of for this?
‫Well, I would possibly say we should encourage people to shop locally as much as possible, possibly
‫with discounts of things like this.
‫We should therefore encourage people to shop locally as much as possible to help those within within
‫our surrounding communities.
‫That just as a nice short sentence.
‫The solution I've offered.
‫So this is less problem here as well as this.
‫When small businesses or shops close, it makes it difficult to support people in the local community
‫as much.
‫They don't like the sound of that.
‫They're not going to get rid of that community.
‫We should therefore encourage people to shop locally as much as possible to help those within our surrounding
‫communities.
‫OK, so I think we can jump on to a quick conclusion, no need to give our opinion.
‫In conclusion, it's clear to see that there are many problems and possible solutions to large supermarkets
‫opening and closing smaller shops in local communities, repeating local communities again.
‫But that's no problem.
‫OK, so let's take a look at our word count.
‫OK, so actually slightly shorter than I thought, I thought I was going to go quite over, but it's
‫actually 310 words.
‫Exactly.
‫So to be honest, that's about right, or maybe even a little bit shorter.
‫So, yeah, pretty good.
‫I did manage to explore a lot of the problems and give some really useful solutions.
‫So this is a top a top marked essay here.
‫As always, if you have any questions, please do use the Q&A section.
‫I always like hearing from you.