Okay.
Let's continue with the bar chart strategy.
And in this lecture, I'm going to be going over specific detail, paragraphs one and two.
Our goal with a specific details paragraph is to compare the data details, numbers, differences and
similarities.
Each paragraph should take no more than 5 minutes to be able to construct no more than 5 minutes for
each specific details paragraph.
That means to write specific details, paragraph one and paragraph two.
The total time is 10 minutes.
If you do that and you work on your timing, you should be able to finish up specific details, paragraphs
one and two in 10 minutes and the entire task one writing and write around 18 minutes.
That's the goal that I want you to shoot for 18 minutes.
That way you're going to have 42 minutes to write.
Task number two.
Task number two, as you've heard me say already, is the most important task because it's worth two
thirds of the score.
So now let's go ahead and move in to writing these paragraphs.
Okay.
And here you can see the introduction in general overview, which are already present.
And if you look over here at the bar chart, you can see down here in the bottom in highlighted in yellow
and purple, how I'm going to divide up for paragraph one and paragraph two for the specific details.
In paragraph one, I'm going to cover cooking, cleaning and gardening.
And in the second specific paragraph, I'm going to cover care of own children, maintenance jobs and
clothing, washing, ironing and sewing.
And what we're going to be doing is comparing the males of the females in these different categories.
So now I'm going to go ahead and move forward with writing specific details, paragraphs one and two,
which in the overall scheme of, of the academic writing task are paragraphs three and four.
All right.
Now I'm going to go ahead and go silent while I'm going and while I'm typing out these paragraphs.
And what I want you to do is I want you to go ahead and just watch me type out these paragraphs line
by line, word by word.
I think it's a great way, great way for you to learn.
So let's go ahead and get started.
Okay.
And there you have it.
You have a complete a complete academic writing task, number one for a bar chart.
And there you can see the introduction, the general overview, the specific details, paragraph number
three and specific details, paragraph number four.
Right.
And that's all there is to it.
So it's very important that you're able to really pick out and choose the information that you're going
to write about in advance.
I think where a lot of people in waste time is that they don't do that step.
They try to figure out this information while they're actually trying to write those paragraphs.
And that causes a lot of pausing, hesitation.
And sometimes mistakes which can happen happens to all of us.
It's happened to me before, right?
So it's important for you to be able to select and choose that information in advance.
So now I'm going to go ahead and let you take a look at this in the full screen view.
Right.
And there you can see it in the full screen.
So it's nice and in large print for you to be able to read through it.
But it's not more complicated than that.
It is not more complicated than that.
If you have any questions about what I've written, please feel free to ask.
If you want to, go ahead and ask me.
Can you can you.
Could you have set this as a detail or could you have major comparisons in this kind of way?
Please, please feel free to ask me and I'll let you know.
Yes, it could have been written that way.
Yes, you could have made that comparison because there are many, many different ways of doing it in
terms of comparing the details for these specific paragraphs, number three and four.
All right.
And coming up next, I'm going to go ahead and go over a pie chart.
It's the exact same four paragraph strategy, but I'm going to show you how it's done with a pie chart.
We're going to look at the process of scanning through the pie chart and choosing what information we're
going to use and then being able to apply the strategy and write out an answer.
Write out a report.
All right.
So thank you very much for joining me.
I hope you learn from this.
I've enjoyed being your teacher.
I'll see you in the next lecture.
Talk to you soon.