Now that we have review the introduction in general overview, let's go ahead and get into the specific
details paragraphs here.
We're going to be comparing the data and numbers, the similarities, the differences, the rises and
the falls on the line graphed.
Also, keep in mind that when you're writing your specific details, paragraphs, each paragraph should
take no more than 5 minutes.
That's 10 minutes total for writing these two paragraphs.
If you practice doing that within the time constraints that I'm giving you, you'll always finish on
time and do great.
Okay.
So here we can see the introduction and the general overview present on the right hand side.
On the left hand side, you can look at how I'm going to be really dividing up my specific details.
Paragraphs in paragraph one, I'll be highlighting the yellow, purple and orange parts.
And then in the fourth paragraph, the second specific details paragraph, I'll be highlighting the
lines that are in the future, and you can see those there in turquoise.
All right.
So I'm going to go ahead and move forward.
As I said, you can look and see as I'm writing, as I'm writing the sentences, as I'm writing the
sentences, you can look and see which parts of the line graph I'm addressing.
First, I'll be addressing the yellow lines, then the purple part, then the orange in this first specific
details paragraph.
Right?
So pay close attention as always.
If you have any questions about it, feel free to ask me.
Also, if you can think of a different way, a different way of talking about the numbers on this line
graph, and you want to show me what you're doing in terms or ask me, can I compare it this way?
Can I use the comparisons this kind of way?
Is this okay?
Feel free to show me, you know, and I'll, I'll take a look at it or whatever.
But you know, really only if you're doing something different than what I'm doing.
OC Because really this is about the learning process and I want to give students opportunities to see
as many different ways of comparing numbers or making comparisons with a line graph.
All right.
So I'm going to go ahead and go silent while I write this first paragraph.
Och.
And there is the first body paragraph, right, the first body paragraph and you can take a look at
the verbal language in terms of remaining consistent in the past tense.
Remaining consistent in the past tense.
And you can see how I attack those different lines from the yellow, purple and the orange lines.
Right now, I'm going to go ahead and move forward and write the next body paragraph, which we're going
into the future.
All right.
And there you have it.
That is a complete line graph analysis.
We have the introduction, the general overview, the first specific details paragraph and the second
specific details paragraph.
I think that the line graph for most students can be one of the most challenging ones to do because
you have to be able to really look at and decide which sections of the line graph are you going to attack?
Which sections of the line graph are you going to explain?
And then being able to make those comparisons within the time constraints that you're given, that's
something that's really, really difficult, really difficult to be able to do, really a challenge
to do.
But but I think I think that you can do it.
I think that you can do it if you take your time, I think you'll be able to reach those marks.
Now, in terms of this line graph, if somebody wanted to, instead of talking about in that last line,
I talked about the USA and Sweden at their endpoints.
If somebody wanted to talk about the USA and Sweden and give a sentence for how at this point right
here around 2020 to 2030, Sweden had a a drop, a slight drop in their percentage.
And if somebody wanted to have a sentence that said for the USA, they remain steady from 2000 to around
2020 and then began to skyrocket up to around 23%.
Somebody can say that that would be perfectly fine to say that there are many, many different ways
of being able to make the comparison points.
You could have written the sentence that way also.
OC So if you have any, any, any sentences in terms of could you have made this kind of comparison
for this type of between these two points?
You know, feel free to address that at any at any rate, this is a complete line graph analysis.
I'm going to show it to you in the full screen mode so you can really see it really, really well.
Take your time, read through it.
If you have any questions, let me know.
Coming up next, we're going to be looking at something new, a table, right?
The table analysis.
And we're going to go through the scanning process of selecting the information that we're going to
use and also the application of the writing strategy.
So you can give a really good answer to a table.
QUESTION Thank you very much for joining me.
I hope you learned a lot from this and I'll talk to you soon.
Thanks a lot.