Okay, everybody.
Now we are going into a live example.
So if you don't hear me talking as much on this live example is because I'm actually writing.
And so I'll talk when I'm able to talk, but I want to write a letter live so that I want to write.
I want to write the letter live so that you're able to really see live action writing and see see a
letter as it's being developed part by part.
So that's the purpose of this is being written live, is not being written, is not being stopped and
explained.
I did that already and I gave you five examples stopping and explaining each part.
This is a live letter.
There won't be a lot of talking, but the purpose of it is just to show you the progression from part
to part to part.
All right.
So here we go.
The letter says, write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him or her in another
friend on a small picnic.
Include the following in your letter where you plan to go, what arrangements you already made.
What help you need from your friend with this picnic.
So of course, the first thing we're going to start out with doing is doing an outline and we're going
to have our different parts are part one.
I want to go to I want to go to Yellowstone National Park.
And I'll I'll probably use these outlines maybe in some of the other lectures that I'm doing as some
examples, maybe Yellowstone National Park.
Part two I want to check the weather, call the entry fee,
reserve place and order the food.
Now I'm writing all these down as examples, but it doesn't necessarily mean I'm going to use all this
information.
I'm just trying to really put down some ideas that I could write about so that I don't have to try to
think about these ideas while I am writing.
That way I can really focus on how I want to say something and not have to really think about what I
want to say.
And that's going to help her to be better.
All right.
So there we have an outline.
And outline needs to be done in less than a minute.
You're going to be handwriting, but you should be able to get it done in less than a minute.
You definitely can get it done in less than a minute if you're really practicing.
All right.
So this is the letter to your friend, to my letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him
or her and another friend on a small picnic.
All right.
So this letter to my friend.
So let's get started and say.
Dear William.
All right.
My friend named my friend's name William.
And so we're going to start out with our introduction.
It's that time of year again.
Our annual get together.
So.
Right.
So look at our opening sentence.
Hey, Will, is that time of year again when we have our annual get together?
And this year we've decided on a traditional American picnic.
So we need to discuss our program, our plans, our program.
That's an introduction for you.
You see, the language is informal.
Now, I need to go into this next part about where where we're going to go, where where is the plan
to go?
I guess we need to first think about.
Really picnic should take place.
And there are so many options, including.
I'm writing this live, so we have to correct some mistakes as I go, but not limited to.
The beach.
Mountains.
Poor.
Desert.
I got to be careful.
Right.
Desert and not desert there.
There's our opening sentence about where we want to go.
That's the first thing we have to think about is where we want to go.
Luckily, Paul Riley has all of these locations, but.
Since it's my turn.
To decide this year.
Comma, I feel that we should picnic in beautiful.
Beautifully famous
Yellowstone Park.
All right.
So there we have our our part of our sentence sentence about where we're going to have our picnic,
right.
The location.
And here we have two sentences.
Remember, it could be 2 to 3 sentences.
Moving on to other matters, right.
That's a good coherence language there.
And you see the contractions.
Contractions.
All right.
So there we see a good opening sentence for our next part about the arrangements that I've already made.
Right.
You get the idea from that topic sentence about the arrangements that have already been made.
Let's see.
So I'm going to talk about the weather.
I've checked the weather.
And I also.
Call the park.
We might want.
When I'm typing too, I always type O before T.
I don't know why I do that.
I need to fix my fingers.
Also, I made a reservation
for a sweet spot.
Colloquial language next to the canyon.
And ordered Lebanese food.
I like Lebanese food.
Okay.
All right.
There's our second part about the arrangements I've made.
Now, this one has three sentences.
The previous one had two sentences.
Right.
But you see, the the the amount of words are about the same.
All right.
So now we are moving into our next part, which is what help do I need from my friend and the other
guy?
The other guy?
About what other help do I need?
Having done my part.
I just need a little bit.
Look at the relaxed language, the tone.
A little bit of extra help from my partners.
Right.
So.
William, please.
Ex your wife.
Your lovely wife has used a good adverb there.
If we can.
Borrow her.
Chequered blankets to give that authentic feel right.
Martin.
Now, Martin is the other guy.
Martin needs to do a bit more
and bring along the drinks.
Here we go.
Some parallel lives and bring along the drinks.
Have the music prepared and
help me drive out to the park.
Yep.
We are making him do a lot of work.
All right, we finished that paragraph, and then we have our conclusion.
Och, that's it, right?
Contraction.
We all know the plan of action.
Exclamation point.
See you guys soon.
All the best informal language.
Big Mike.
Big Mike is writing again.
Okay.
So there we have it, everybody.
We have an informal letter written from beginning to end.
Right from beginning to end.
And as you see, again, we have all the parts, we have all the necessary parts to be able to write
a really solid letter.
And if we look at our letter C, how many words do we have here?
210.
Right.
210 words.
Right.
I don't know if they count the Dear William or not.
I don't think they do.
210.
All right.
So this is an example of how you should write a letter from beginning to end.
This is an informal letter, and I just want to kind of take you through it from beginning to end to
show you how we go part by part by part by part.
This is how you have to write everybody.
So I hope this live example was very helpful for you.
Talk to you soon.