1 00:00:00,510 --> 00:00:01,530 Okay, everybody. 2 00:00:01,830 --> 00:00:05,250 Now we are going into a live example. 3 00:00:05,520 --> 00:00:13,740 So if you don't hear me talking as much on this live example is because I'm actually writing. 4 00:00:14,760 --> 00:00:24,240 And so I'll talk when I'm able to talk, but I want to write a letter live so that I want to write. 5 00:00:24,300 --> 00:00:33,630 I want to write the letter live so that you're able to really see live action writing and see see a 6 00:00:33,630 --> 00:00:37,050 letter as it's being developed part by part. 7 00:00:38,820 --> 00:00:46,590 So that's the purpose of this is being written live, is not being written, is not being stopped and 8 00:00:46,590 --> 00:00:47,670 explained. 9 00:00:47,790 --> 00:00:54,420 I did that already and I gave you five examples stopping and explaining each part. 10 00:00:54,540 --> 00:00:56,280 This is a live letter. 11 00:00:56,730 --> 00:01:04,350 There won't be a lot of talking, but the purpose of it is just to show you the progression from part 12 00:01:04,350 --> 00:01:06,120 to part to part. 13 00:01:07,680 --> 00:01:08,160 All right. 14 00:01:08,160 --> 00:01:09,540 So here we go. 15 00:01:11,700 --> 00:01:21,630 The letter says, write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him or her in another 16 00:01:21,630 --> 00:01:23,320 friend on a small picnic. 17 00:01:23,340 --> 00:01:29,400 Include the following in your letter where you plan to go, what arrangements you already made. 18 00:01:29,550 --> 00:01:32,610 What help you need from your friend with this picnic. 19 00:01:32,850 --> 00:01:41,370 So of course, the first thing we're going to start out with doing is doing an outline and we're going 20 00:01:41,370 --> 00:01:44,340 to have our different parts are part one. 21 00:01:45,570 --> 00:01:54,120 I want to go to I want to go to Yellowstone National Park. 22 00:01:57,060 --> 00:02:04,770 And I'll I'll probably use these outlines maybe in some of the other lectures that I'm doing as some 23 00:02:04,770 --> 00:02:09,120 examples, maybe Yellowstone National Park. 24 00:02:11,010 --> 00:02:21,150 Part two I want to check the weather, call the entry fee, 25 00:02:23,700 --> 00:02:28,890 reserve place and order the food. 26 00:02:28,920 --> 00:02:34,680 Now I'm writing all these down as examples, but it doesn't necessarily mean I'm going to use all this 27 00:02:34,680 --> 00:02:35,280 information. 28 00:02:35,280 --> 00:02:41,370 I'm just trying to really put down some ideas that I could write about so that I don't have to try to 29 00:02:41,370 --> 00:02:45,030 think about these ideas while I am writing. 30 00:02:45,210 --> 00:02:52,140 That way I can really focus on how I want to say something and not have to really think about what I 31 00:02:52,140 --> 00:02:53,010 want to say. 32 00:02:53,130 --> 00:02:54,960 And that's going to help her to be better. 33 00:02:55,380 --> 00:02:55,620 All right. 34 00:02:55,620 --> 00:02:57,120 So there we have an outline. 35 00:02:57,360 --> 00:02:59,730 And outline needs to be done in less than a minute. 36 00:03:00,840 --> 00:03:05,970 You're going to be handwriting, but you should be able to get it done in less than a minute. 37 00:03:05,970 --> 00:03:10,020 You definitely can get it done in less than a minute if you're really practicing. 38 00:03:10,230 --> 00:03:10,500 All right. 39 00:03:10,500 --> 00:03:18,150 So this is the letter to your friend, to my letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him 40 00:03:18,600 --> 00:03:24,570 or her and another friend on a small picnic. 41 00:03:25,650 --> 00:03:25,890 All right. 42 00:03:25,890 --> 00:03:27,540 So this letter to my friend. 43 00:03:30,150 --> 00:03:34,530 So let's get started and say. 44 00:03:37,790 --> 00:03:38,780 Dear William. 45 00:03:39,320 --> 00:03:39,920 All right. 46 00:03:39,950 --> 00:03:42,170 My friend named my friend's name William. 47 00:03:42,410 --> 00:03:47,570 And so we're going to start out with our introduction. 48 00:03:57,400 --> 00:03:59,110 It's that time of year again. 49 00:04:10,740 --> 00:04:12,360 Our annual get together. 50 00:04:29,810 --> 00:04:30,860 So. 51 00:04:40,140 --> 00:04:40,340 Right. 52 00:04:40,400 --> 00:04:41,930 So look at our opening sentence. 53 00:04:41,930 --> 00:04:46,970 Hey, Will, is that time of year again when we have our annual get together? 54 00:04:46,970 --> 00:04:50,060 And this year we've decided on a traditional American picnic. 55 00:04:50,060 --> 00:04:54,800 So we need to discuss our program, our plans, our program. 56 00:04:54,800 --> 00:04:56,300 That's an introduction for you. 57 00:04:56,420 --> 00:04:58,730 You see, the language is informal. 58 00:04:58,910 --> 00:05:06,500 Now, I need to go into this next part about where where we're going to go, where where is the plan 59 00:05:06,500 --> 00:05:07,070 to go? 60 00:05:20,070 --> 00:05:22,140 I guess we need to first think about. 61 00:05:27,490 --> 00:05:29,970 Really picnic should take place. 62 00:05:38,960 --> 00:05:43,940 And there are so many options, including. 63 00:05:47,380 --> 00:05:54,490 I'm writing this live, so we have to correct some mistakes as I go, but not limited to. 64 00:06:00,050 --> 00:06:03,890 The beach. 65 00:06:06,190 --> 00:06:07,480 Mountains. 66 00:06:09,380 --> 00:06:10,130 Poor. 67 00:06:15,340 --> 00:06:15,910 Desert. 68 00:06:17,830 --> 00:06:18,550 I got to be careful. 69 00:06:18,550 --> 00:06:18,760 Right. 70 00:06:18,790 --> 00:06:20,290 Desert and not desert there. 71 00:06:21,580 --> 00:06:24,100 There's our opening sentence about where we want to go. 72 00:06:24,100 --> 00:06:27,850 That's the first thing we have to think about is where we want to go. 73 00:06:35,670 --> 00:06:39,900 Luckily, Paul Riley has all of these locations, but. 74 00:06:41,730 --> 00:06:44,460 Since it's my turn. 75 00:06:46,090 --> 00:06:50,470 To decide this year. 76 00:06:51,940 --> 00:07:01,480 Comma, I feel that we should picnic in beautiful. 77 00:07:05,910 --> 00:07:07,680 Beautifully famous 78 00:07:10,350 --> 00:07:12,660 Yellowstone Park. 79 00:07:15,970 --> 00:07:16,290 All right. 80 00:07:16,290 --> 00:07:29,160 So there we have our our part of our sentence sentence about where we're going to have our picnic, 81 00:07:29,490 --> 00:07:30,000 right. 82 00:07:30,000 --> 00:07:30,780 The location. 83 00:07:30,790 --> 00:07:32,520 And here we have two sentences. 84 00:07:32,700 --> 00:07:34,980 Remember, it could be 2 to 3 sentences. 85 00:07:43,180 --> 00:07:46,070 Moving on to other matters, right. 86 00:07:46,090 --> 00:07:48,190 That's a good coherence language there. 87 00:07:51,630 --> 00:07:53,940 And you see the contractions. 88 00:08:02,210 --> 00:08:03,680 Contractions. 89 00:08:23,470 --> 00:08:24,550 All right. 90 00:08:24,690 --> 00:08:31,830 So there we see a good opening sentence for our next part about the arrangements that I've already made. 91 00:08:31,830 --> 00:08:32,460 Right. 92 00:08:32,760 --> 00:08:38,310 You get the idea from that topic sentence about the arrangements that have already been made. 93 00:08:50,550 --> 00:08:51,210 Let's see. 94 00:08:53,310 --> 00:08:55,410 So I'm going to talk about the weather. 95 00:08:58,320 --> 00:08:59,910 I've checked the weather. 96 00:09:01,740 --> 00:09:03,720 And I also. 97 00:09:08,740 --> 00:09:09,880 Call the park. 98 00:09:11,410 --> 00:09:11,980 We might want. 99 00:09:12,070 --> 00:09:14,520 When I'm typing too, I always type O before T. 100 00:09:14,530 --> 00:09:15,570 I don't know why I do that. 101 00:09:15,580 --> 00:09:17,140 I need to fix my fingers. 102 00:09:45,210 --> 00:09:48,390 Also, I made a reservation 103 00:09:50,670 --> 00:09:54,030 for a sweet spot. 104 00:09:54,090 --> 00:09:58,830 Colloquial language next to the canyon. 105 00:10:06,900 --> 00:10:11,560 And ordered Lebanese food. 106 00:10:11,580 --> 00:10:13,020 I like Lebanese food. 107 00:10:13,920 --> 00:10:14,530 Okay. 108 00:10:15,120 --> 00:10:15,570 All right. 109 00:10:15,570 --> 00:10:18,540 There's our second part about the arrangements I've made. 110 00:10:18,840 --> 00:10:20,850 Now, this one has three sentences. 111 00:10:20,850 --> 00:10:22,950 The previous one had two sentences. 112 00:10:23,380 --> 00:10:24,000 Right. 113 00:10:24,150 --> 00:10:28,620 But you see, the the the amount of words are about the same. 114 00:10:29,490 --> 00:10:29,880 All right. 115 00:10:29,880 --> 00:10:40,080 So now we are moving into our next part, which is what help do I need from my friend and the other 116 00:10:40,080 --> 00:10:40,620 guy? 117 00:10:41,160 --> 00:10:42,000 The other guy? 118 00:10:42,000 --> 00:10:43,890 About what other help do I need? 119 00:10:45,750 --> 00:10:47,250 Having done my part. 120 00:10:52,440 --> 00:10:56,670 I just need a little bit. 121 00:10:57,000 --> 00:10:59,250 Look at the relaxed language, the tone. 122 00:11:00,240 --> 00:11:09,120 A little bit of extra help from my partners. 123 00:11:10,140 --> 00:11:10,750 Right. 124 00:11:11,490 --> 00:11:12,360 So. 125 00:11:14,860 --> 00:11:19,060 William, please. 126 00:11:19,060 --> 00:11:21,820 Ex your wife. 127 00:11:23,410 --> 00:11:26,710 Your lovely wife has used a good adverb there. 128 00:11:28,660 --> 00:11:30,070 If we can. 129 00:11:32,540 --> 00:11:35,810 Borrow her. 130 00:11:38,340 --> 00:11:49,530 Chequered blankets to give that authentic feel right. 131 00:11:54,940 --> 00:11:55,490 Martin. 132 00:11:55,490 --> 00:11:56,980 Now, Martin is the other guy. 133 00:12:12,410 --> 00:12:18,860 Martin needs to do a bit more 134 00:12:22,400 --> 00:12:27,710 and bring along the drinks. 135 00:12:27,980 --> 00:12:28,390 Here we go. 136 00:12:28,400 --> 00:12:30,920 Some parallel lives and bring along the drinks. 137 00:12:38,480 --> 00:12:43,640 Have the music prepared and 138 00:12:45,920 --> 00:12:50,390 help me drive out to the park. 139 00:12:51,830 --> 00:12:52,100 Yep. 140 00:12:52,100 --> 00:12:54,320 We are making him do a lot of work. 141 00:12:56,210 --> 00:12:59,870 All right, we finished that paragraph, and then we have our conclusion. 142 00:13:01,670 --> 00:13:05,900 Och, that's it, right? 143 00:13:07,010 --> 00:13:08,110 Contraction. 144 00:13:09,980 --> 00:13:15,080 We all know the plan of action. 145 00:13:15,080 --> 00:13:16,880 Exclamation point. 146 00:13:18,770 --> 00:13:22,040 See you guys soon. 147 00:13:29,800 --> 00:13:32,380 All the best informal language. 148 00:13:37,700 --> 00:13:38,350 Big Mike. 149 00:13:38,360 --> 00:13:39,860 Big Mike is writing again. 150 00:13:40,170 --> 00:13:40,820 Okay. 151 00:13:40,820 --> 00:13:42,470 So there we have it, everybody. 152 00:13:43,130 --> 00:13:47,060 We have an informal letter written from beginning to end. 153 00:13:47,750 --> 00:13:50,060 Right from beginning to end. 154 00:13:50,330 --> 00:13:58,550 And as you see, again, we have all the parts, we have all the necessary parts to be able to write 155 00:13:58,550 --> 00:14:00,290 a really solid letter. 156 00:14:01,790 --> 00:14:04,640 And if we look at our letter C, how many words do we have here? 157 00:14:06,170 --> 00:14:07,160 210. 158 00:14:07,550 --> 00:14:08,150 Right. 159 00:14:08,750 --> 00:14:10,550 210 words. 160 00:14:11,060 --> 00:14:11,650 Right. 161 00:14:11,660 --> 00:14:13,580 I don't know if they count the Dear William or not. 162 00:14:13,580 --> 00:14:14,540 I don't think they do. 163 00:14:14,570 --> 00:14:15,650 210. 164 00:14:15,980 --> 00:14:16,520 All right. 165 00:14:16,520 --> 00:14:26,000 So this is an example of how you should write a letter from beginning to end. 166 00:14:26,000 --> 00:14:31,970 This is an informal letter, and I just want to kind of take you through it from beginning to end to 167 00:14:31,970 --> 00:14:35,780 show you how we go part by part by part by part. 168 00:14:35,810 --> 00:14:38,330 This is how you have to write everybody. 169 00:14:38,510 --> 00:14:42,380 So I hope this live example was very helpful for you. 170 00:14:42,380 --> 00:14:43,400 Talk to you soon.