Okay.
In this video, I'm going to give you a part three sample answer.
This one is connected to the part two swimming question.
All right.
So first question, should swimming pools be free?
Ideally swimming pools or any other sport facilities would be provided for free.
But actually I support charging for entrance.
If residents don't pay when using swimming pools, governments will depend upon public spending to cover
staff salaries and upgrades.
This money is better spent on more meaningful activities, such as helping with underprivileged children
in after school programs anyway.
Entrance tickets to the pool are well within the ballpark of what the average Joe can afford.
Right?
In purple, we have our fluency language.
In red, we have two really good two two sets of idiomatic language within the ballpark and average
Joe.
We have a we have we're using a compound sentence.
We're using a conditional sentence.
So really, we're showing a lot of skill in this answer choice.
Next, is it important to learn swimming?
Not only is swimming a necessary survival skill, but also a relaxing leisure activity.
Hence, it will be both advantageous and stress relieving to learn the art of swimming every summer.
Heartbreaking accidents related to water incidents occur as swimming holes and beaches around the country,
and most of the victims lack swimming skills or were never taught strictly based on safety reasons.
Non swimmers should learn to swim.
OC who is the perfect person to teach people how to swim?
Well, those who go through lifeguard training or were formerly swim team members know techniques and
swim at an expert level.
So a swimming athlete would be ideal, but I doubt they're easily located.
Swimming has some risky elements that need to be taken into account.
So to manage unexpected situations such as cramps or drowning, a teacher should receive medical training
to improvise quickly upon an emergency.
The aforementioned lifeguards have this ability.
Thank you very much for joining us.
Let me go back for a second and just touch on a few things before I close out.
We definitely have some really good subject specific vocabulary.
Lifeguard training, swim team member, swimming, athlete cramps, drowning.
All of that is really good language.
That really adds to a grade.
Well, of course, is really good fluency language need to be taken into account is a really good phrase.
If you can use phrases like that, it really impresses the greater OC.
Thank you very much for joining us and I look forward to sharing another sample dancer with you.